Pretty good, although...
Mediocre voiceacting (except for the flame dancer bit, that was brilliant. The Goron hero wasn't bad either). Seems like whoever was doing Navy got a better microphone in the middle of the recording. Should have redone the lines rather than being lazy and having half of the in low-q.
You also forgot to give Link a red suit for the volcano area, even though you prepared him for Zora's Domain.
Merely details that would have made this better. It's still a great animation, looking forward to whatever project you're working on.